My Shepherd

bitter

For we shall not want
          and not with us
          the want wants us more
We seek not our own opinion
venture not into satisfaction
            with life and ourselves

Ourself in a vacuum
but in belief
to a life unrelenting

I lay in green fields that are burning.

Author's Note

is needless. a note for reviewers would be needless, needles.. needles in my palm. You don't need it.

Reviews

[dreaming dame]

idk bout this..

[Coyote Poetry]

Good use of words. I had to read twice. I like your thoughts and how you ended this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Love the wordplay used here.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

i like this poem...has a nice use of language here...nice :)