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First draft!! The time is now!! I had an experience one night, where very vividly a spirit came into my consciousness calling himself El-o-him and explained to me, that El-o-him is We-are-Him

Nathan Baker-11/3/18 12:41pm 1st draft

Feeling like we were left behind?
Never given the chance to shine?
Well, don't fret.. Don't get lost,
Inside your mind
Close your 2 eyes and open the 3rd, You'll be just fine
Ignore their threat, Ignore the cost~

Forward thinking, Unconditional loving, Light shinning, Egos dying
Sinful, one and all, broken are we, but mended we shall be... Don't ignore the call
Forefathers had created ideas, Love in their hearts, Stealing a land to give future man, Peace and Prosperity for one and ALL...
Now rolling in graves, generations spitting in their faces!!

Hate propagated by falsifying history, covered up genocide of Native man, and the beasts..
For steel beams laid across the land... Locomotives and the businessman, revolutionary industrialism for a profit..
And an Earth to destroy~

Feeling like we were left behind?
Well, nevermind, we've arrived right on time!!

Never given the chance to shine?
Reflecting the lives of the ones who've come before, it's their light within us ALL as WE shine!!

So, don't fret, don't get lost
Inside your mind..
Navigate the circuits w/ a smile on ya face, never fret & never worry, Let HOME be inside your Mind!!

We can ALL stand now, As ONE united..
In El-o-him be OUR strength..
No threat again shall we fear, for We-are-Him and in Him-we-are-ALL together as ONE...
For this battle of spirit and mind, separate from this physical plain, Ignore the cost of giving this physical existence...

Growing through Spirit, strengthening the Mind
Learning to fly and to never die!!
Ascending We-are-ALL, as ONE or as NONE!!

In El-o-Him, WE-are-Him

Reviews

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I think you put so many,stuff in one poem. If you cut them half maybe I will be enjoy more. But that's my problem too. On end you put quiet moralistic tone. We have to unite we must be one. Which is for me quiet horrified. All dictators have same phrases in they speach. But just me and maybe I am wrong.

[Nathan D Baker]

I was attempting to begin with questions, and while leading the readers towards answers..Allowing them to decide for themselves if and how they can see the obviousness of our propaganda machine in America!! And the Oneness that I am referring, is that of people working as ONE to spread love at higher vibrations and fighting against tyrannical governments which was the entire purpose of creating The Declaration of Independence!!

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First of all thanks for feed back and answer. It's quiet rare here if you are don't give praise. I personally believe only author can completely understand what he wrote and why. You have good attempt but how I said before less is more special in poetry. We poets always think our writing is best .I finding helpful for myself to attending local writing group . When you read loud in your voice bunch of people who have more experience in writing and they want give you healthy,feed back. Don't forget pietry don't live just online but special in real life. Henry Miller once said if you don't use language of street you still writing wrong. Real life is best poetry.