Capturing the Moment

Capturing the Moment

To feel the subtle waves
of cushions of softness,
reaching from waters,
and tranquility motions,
rushing sounds
sends quivers up and down
the spine.

The cool refreshing scent
as it touches one skin,
inhaling as if a bouquet of red roses,
lifting the spirit on a overcast day.

To see the warming light
shine from the eyes that shares
hopes and dreams
as if singing to the soul
like a choir enchanting notes
that wake the glory of God
from a gentle rest.

The wraps of love
brings forth a glow,
a honor that one can only share
if heartbeats,
shake the very ground
that life treads on…
pure, loving and graceful…

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Very lovely, my friend. I feel the warmth and the peace that comes from being with the right person.... Two sharing the same dream means that they have found their moment and captured it.

The last stanza is extremely powerful and passionate :

'an honor that one can only share/if heartbeats/shake the very ground/that life treads on...'

I enjoyed this very much, Ralphy.

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That's beautiful! Full of vivid images and the allusion of things that we can only percieve on the edge of our own emotions. I loved how subtle and smooth it felt to read, never once sending off a jolt or something that might jar the mind.

Fantastic Poetry!

Hugs!
Tara

[Listener]

It reminds me of Sex... >->;;;

[Emmie]

As always your work leaves me absolutely speechless. It's a wonder to read your work. The imagery was astounding. Thanks for sharing

[Wildfleour]

Very uplifting and overflowing with love.

[JC]

Ralphy,

I haven't been around for awhile, but wow, this just blew me away.

Excellant flow and imagery, and quite frankly just beautiful.

JC

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love it...it is a very good poem
Great Job

[deeps]

Ralphy this is a very beautiful write here and sincere
Very well expressed emotions. Like this.