A Drop for You

 

A drop for you

 

The drops were large

 as they glided down

the channels through each

of the temper zones. 

Some droplets landed on trees,

diving off the leaves

splashing to the ground below. 

 

Yet others,

collided with the sweet

refreshing thoughts

of mating and becoming one. 

 

To walk beneath this array

of drops was unusually breathtaking

and warming to the soul

although the drops themselves

were fidget and cold. 

 

Those tears of nature

skimmed the surface

and slid down the bridge

of the nose pondering

whether to drip or sit adhered. 

 

We just laughed

as the knife of light sliced

through the sky,

baptized us, into the night

electrifying our souls

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' We just laughed as the knife of light sliced through the sky, / baptized us, into the night /electrifying our souls ' ~~~ great finish to a wonderful poem about rain.. rain.. and the don't care feeling because you're walking in it with someone you love.

Wonderful!

[Wildfleour]

Your last stanza is probably the best thing I've ever seen you write. WOW!

[Jessica Fox]

let me guess it rained? LOL A silver tongued classic as usual good job

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very soothing write showing just how spiritual the rain can be... Bravo my friend.

[deeps]

We just laughed as the knife
of light sliced through the sky,
baptized us, into the night
electrifying our souls

Wow! These are beuatiful lines here.
Such a wonderfu l write here.
I like this write alot