Stolen Sun

Some people loss things precious to them and think their world has ended

 

Stolen Sun

 

If you took the sun

 from my very world,

darkness would fall suddenly,

and a chill would frost

my words and slow my heart

 

My eyes would no longer see

the beauty of the flowers

that reflect the precious light

in the many prisms of colors

 

My finger would no longer bend

as my blood coagulates

like syrup and numbness postulate

while reaching to touch

 

I could only use my dulled sense

of smell to locate you,

and the brisk flow

that passes by my nose

would lift my spirit;

causing my heart to pump

a little harder

 

My body would start to warm,  

a blanketing warmth

that reaches across the sky,

giving light in form of a sun…

and my eyes once again will begin

to see

Reviews

[Taylor H]

this was a great picture. i love the details you put into it, since most people forget to do that with poems. great poem, and great job

[APoetsMuse]

WoW. This is great. Paints such a clear picture.

[Jessica Fox]

Another pretty poem with a meaningful message good job

[Cherrie Palmer]

very nice link between the words of the poem and your expression of loss

[Wildfleour]

Sweet..............very sweet.

[deeps]

It's not what we can get it's what we can live by and that's a little love.
Some people are just to blind to see that. Love is what we should live by.
What we lose is something we can't comfoort in and wallow over it.
The best things in life are free. This is a wonderful write here. Ralphy.