Inspiration

 

Inspiration

 

This wondrous planet

that circles around

the heavenly star

has not but to wonder

if her lunar counterpart

is to make the journey,

holding back the tides

and pushing against

the waters in perfect harmony.  

 

 

The ocean oh so blue,

supports life both in and out

of its vast depths

 feeding and nurturing

until a warm wind can lift

the waters to new heights

to blanket the sky

with pure white fluffs

of a rare marvel  design.

 

Each rotation pushes

the clouds around

this enormous world

heating and cooling

releasing the awesome powers

and blowing a whisper

of a baby’s breath

liberating an array

of moisture to the earth below.

 

As the orb gently warms

the surface, those droplets

that hitched a ride

from the ocean

have made their way here,

 to quench the thirst

 of those that are curious

to see the sun.

 

Through the Mira’s panorama

that hides in the depths of space,

Comes you…

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. beautiful flowing picture presented here.. inspiration of life and being alike.. an endless metaphor if you will I can find in this piece as it is written regarding life with our surrounding space but also could represent the space of the people that surround us.. and so many other things! True visions and imagination pop to life with this one ending with the miracle of one being hidden in the depths of Mira.. how sublime!!! Many coming to see the presence of the sun and quench the thirst of what I take to be knowledge of this being.. superb! Could represent the Mira itself of a very unique individual.. love this.. thank you for sharing!!! =)

[brittneymarie]

wow that was beautiful Ralphy, the imagery is very pleasant. Your a fantastic writer :]]

Nice job

BrittneyMarie

[Emmie]

That was, well, awesome. It painted a picture in my mind... one I can't really describe. You always do this... and I love it! I create like a mini-movie in my head... except I don't have tom cruise or lindsay lohan... lol

[Jessica Fox]

Pretty poem good job! Well I could say more but I have no idea what to say lol

[Wildfleour]

Your images are so much more peaceful lately.............that makes me happy, especially for you.

A lovely write, Ralphy.