Chocolate oh Chocolate

This write was inspired by Brianna Brie Valentine's write "For the Love of Chocolate"

 

Chocolate oh chocolate

 

Chocolate oh chocolate

My sweet chocolate

Why have you vanished

From me?

 

Each day I dream

Of your velvet soft

liquid,  like warm blood

traveling through my

veins.

 

Our bodies meet,

an undeniable flavor

that drizzles down

my wet lips,

palpitates my heart,

with a mere drip.

 

My tongue, savories

each drop like

thunder craves

lightening; the

flash of a spark

travels instantly

to my brain.

 

 

 

Chocolate oh chocolate

my sweet chocolate

how could you leave me now?

 

Your warm kiss blends

with my skin and glows for

days on end.

How can I

forget your aroma

among the fruitiest,

nuttiest smells,

like a drug

driving me insane…

 

Everyone want to be like

chocolate, rich in flavor,

dark in color, and able to

stick to their love forever

more…

 

But me,

I want to merge with chocolate,

bond with her, taste her and

one night, when the moon is

just right, bite

into her.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I had left out an 3 stanza...lol

Reviews

[R J Askew]

mmmmmm-mmmmmmmmmmmmm! belgian pralines...70 pct cocoa...dark stuff........oooo I am losing it! must make sure my kids have not nicked the 1/2 a bar left over from last night......your write actually makes me hunger for the stuff!

[Emmie]

"My tongue, savorieseach drop likethunder craves lightening"
My favorite lines. Gives a nice twist to the poem :) I like it =P

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh yeah chocolate is a wonderful addiction and can be used for some fun things... a tasty write.

[Jessica Fox]

You ate all the damn chocolate damn you lmfao!

[Spoken]

mmmm... velvet soft... warm... drizzles down my wet lips... excuse me, i think i hear some voices coming from my kitchen "eeaat meee" gotta go! lol

[Wildfleour]

Just adds to the chocolately goodness!

[Brianna Brie]

But me,
I want to merge with chocolate,
bond with her, taste her and
one night, when the moon is
just right, bite
into her.

Wow...melt in your hand chocolate. This is really erotic with flavor. Tasty read!!

[Wildfleour]

Excellent, Ralphy. Sensual without being tacky. :)