My Obsession

My obsession

Everyone has an obsession
whether be noticed or not
some are quite simple
some curtail a lot


Mine, I love beautiful women
the kind floating in my mind
to capture one of such taste
is never a waste of time

The package really doesn’t matter
form of height and width,
noticing breast and butt
has always been a myth

Please Don’t get me wrong
for even I can see
curvatures and proportionalities
can get the best of me

My favorite of such women
are those that impress,
by protects their precious heart
with such elegance of finesse...

When she moves her lips to talks
her words grab my soul
for hours and on ends
the mightiest of holds

When she begins to listening
her eyes open so wide
a tunnel of prevailing lights
welcomes me inside

When she begins to smiles
her cheeks fill with joy
lips spread the distance
like a child with its favorite toy


When she begins to cry
her face changes form
the darken clouds roll in
like the presence of storm
when she begins to touch
my world comes to ends
like a river flows to an ocean
my new world, begins


This is my obsession
be it what it may
women are the finest creatures,
with the power to make my day

© 2009 Ralphy

Author's Note

let me know what you think....

Reviews

[closed account]

I will tell you what I think!

I think that you are a very smart man, a women is as good as the man her arm
is intwind with!

it takes a strong loving man to stand beside a strong loving women, it goes both ways
giver her your check? and you just made her happy!!

LMAO!!!! NOOOO I AM SO KIDDING... HAHA

sorry... me again.. lol

I really admire your love and respect for women.. it's a very attractive quality!! :-)

[justjenn_2u]

You look beyond the surface in many ways.

I can appreciate a man expressing his intimate thinking of a woman. Much applause! : )

You did well putting this one together.

[Emmie]

I like it, made me smile :) lol, reminds me a bit of some recent love trouble, but eventually things will even out :) Nice write!

[Wildfleour]

Beautiful image - soft pink roses and chocolate.............works wonders with women! :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Awesome work... the flow is very good.. the feeling in it is you admire women for all their beauty and all should view women this way.. big or small.. this poem is a tribute to all women.. thank you for sharing your work!!! Fabulous writing.

[Wildfleour]

Like the changes, Ralphy.

[Ralphy]

Thanks Serendipity, I made those changes

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ahhh yes women are most magnificent... i too love them in different shapes and sizes but the heart of a good woman can't be beat... and when you find one worth keeping that is that greatest obbession of all.

[Jessica Fox]

Awww thank you I knew you liked me but I didn't know you were obsessed with me! HAHAHAHA J/K well women and their eccentricities are your obsession good job

[Wildfleour]

I think you're a smart man. :)

The second to last stanza - not sure about the last two lines. They don't seem to fit.