Two Empty Hands

Two Empty Hands

A Poem by Ralphy
"

Gods symbolic jesters and turning his cup to red, part two

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Two empty hands
 
Last, is my tin cup
still filled with my tears
sitting on a slab,
as two birds fly by
and sit on a withered branch
love concords all
as their wings flap
an their eyes meet
gazing in to see deep
nothing here to weep
 
A lion sits in the meadow
in tall grass that hides his mane
against his chest is a little lamb
snuggled up against his fur
so peaceful as he sleeps
in the tall and deep
nothing here to weep
 
A mighty oak stands
in the lost forest
were many flowers
and bees
nestle,
pollinating and spreading seeds
lifting them high in the air
falling to the soil beneath
buried down deep
nothing here to weep
 
I stood in amazement
not knowing what to say
here I’ve been given back
my tears that I had shed
my tin cup is now the color red
I could not understand
framed in two empty hands

© 2009 Ralphy


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Great continuation...

A lion sits in the meadow
in tall grass that hides his mane
against his chest is a little lamb
snuggled up against his fur
so peaceful as he sleeps
in the tall and deep
nothing here to weep

love this verse... you keep the inspiration moving in showing that though we may be different we can still get along.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great continuation...

A lion sits in the meadow
in tall grass that hides his mane
against his chest is a little lamb
snuggled up against his fur
so peaceful as he sleeps
in the tall and deep
nothing here to weep

love this verse... you keep the inspiration moving in showing that though we may be different we can still get along.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read part three before part two, but it all flowed beautifully anyway.

Your message rings loud and clear - and so truthfully. Like a ray of light.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very unique! Nice write! Yay! I'm second to review! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another interesting write and I am the first to review it go me

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ralphy
Ralphy

Belleville, MI



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