Lust or trust

Lust or trust

A Story by Ralphy
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A short story about a woman name Susan...it's border line adult but good values

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Susan is a
voluptuous woman
for when you see her,
your senses will tingle
and transpire into
a world of lust, if even
just for a moment.
Her tantalizing figure
 of 36, 24, 36
has me tripping over
my third leg
and I do desire her
yes I do.
 
But unfortunately
she not so bright,
for she allows men
to abuse her
fine work of art
leaving her in the mist
of the night.
She lies there in her room
as darkness surrounds her,
tears flow like waterfalls
until the sunrise.
 
The next day
she starts again
listening to the lies
that men tell her,  
just to sample her fruit.
 
Her addiction to the lust
that surrounds her warm lips
gives a sensation of pulses
through her body
waves upon wave…
exploding in seconds
again leaving her empty
alone,
 in the darkness of her room.
 
It’s now my turn,
as my halo whirls around
on the tip of my horns,
I must contemplate
the choices before me
as Susan is about to witness
a new man, different man
a man who just might
change her direction…
Then again
it could be more of the same.
Wonder what I will do?
 
 
 

© 2009 Ralphy


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Well, the title just drew me in. This is good. I liked it a lot. It's lusty yet sensitive all at the same time. Gives the dilemma of wanting to be totally selfish yet responsible all at once. Excellent.
In light of this write I think you'll like one of mine called "The Object". I'll send it your way...if you don't mind. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I agree with Kim!!!! this was a great write, I love how you contimplate
what crown you would wear, the horns or the halo!! hmmm
descisions descisions!!!


Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I say go after her! What a write you have penned here. I guess she brings out the devil in you as well.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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