Fresh Scent

Love the smell

Fresh Scent

 

Through my eyes

I see her beauty

wavering in the air

like warm ripples rising.

 

A sudden dizzy spell,

knocks me off my feet

like a seasonal

changing wind

of hurricane force.

 

A blast of fresh

fragrance,

a swirling scent

adds instability

to the lifting air,

intensifying

my wobbly

knees…

 

Chanel Allure,

capturing my soul

as I drench my head

with icy liquids,

regaining my composure,

and not a moment too soon

as she glides by…

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

My friend you write with such great passion... using the beauty of nature to capture the purity of new love

A sudden dizzy spell,
knock me off my feet
like a seasonal
changing wind
of hurricane force.

this stanza says it all bout how new love can carry you away and make life feel brand new.

[Butterflymom]

This is joyful, brillant, and heartfelt. What a beautiful tribute to a lucky lady!

[Winter McPherson]

Sweet! I love the absolute take-my-breath away reverie that is captured here. The way a woman effects a man with just her scent. Fantastic write!

[Brianna Brie]

Oh, how I love cologne on a man. Yes, dizzy spells! Love the words you chose for descriptions. This poem is a passionate tease. Sexy write

[closed account]

passionate passionate passionate!!! very alluring!!!!!!!

oooooh Ralphy..... something is in the air!!!

[Jessica Fox]

oh man I thought that said warm n*****s, and it wasn't even on purpose I just looked at it wrong geeze. Good job go you.

[Wildfleour]

Nice! You captured the moment well.

[Ladysue]

This made me smile...LOL...I love the way you did this. You captured this moment so well that could visualize it perfectly. This stanza was brilliantly put together!

Chanel Allure,
capturing my soul
as I drench my head
with icy liquids,
gaining composure,
add not a moment too soon
as she glides by�

A charmingly romantic write!!!

[just is]

Chanel Allure,
capturing my soul
as I drench my head
with icy liquids,
gaining composure,
and not a moment too soon
as she glides by�

I love these lines here
this is a real beuatiful write
enjoyed this.

[reca-becca]

This is a wonderful poem! i really feel Like i can see you falling all over this girl and that i can see you srolling in your sleep over her. ha ha ha. Good job keep it up and always follow yor dreams!
love,
reca-becca