oxygen

A thief in the night...they want to be like me

 

Oxygen

 

Many men wish

for the element of surprise

as they search high and low

for their dream dates.

In the rouge of the lake,

at the top of a steeple,

they search and search

in hopes they can be

just like me. 

 

Some show the color

of their charming eyes,

while others bend and flex,

still others just show

the making of a bright smile,

All of this just to be like me.

 

It’s funny sometimes,

I think how fortunate I am,

to be able to mesmerize

a woman with my witty charm.  

If they knew my secret,

the truth would be known

and I would be no different

than any of others seeking thrones.

 

For I touch their hands,

while looking them

deep  in the eyes,

their lips begin to pucker

for that abating kiss…

I do what, only I can do…

I steal their oxygen,

in a long lasting exchange

of passion. 

 

The woozy feeling captures

 a splendid moment of heaven,

 gift wrapped just for me…

 

Oh if the secret was exposed,

I would be just a normal guy…

in search for the perfect woman

who would always be

only a kiss away.

Reviews

[Pj]

I'm going to have to agree with everyone else- ego poem! hehehe But that's a good thing because if a man has confidence and is self re-assured, he can then spend his time on his woman and make her feel loved and secure :)
Lovely!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I must say you show a lot of confidence which is not a bad thing but like how in the end you show your vulnerable side in wanting more then just the physical.

[Jessica Fox]

I agree ego poem, wait you have witty charm?

[closed account]

wowoa! what confidence you have!! that is a complement!!
self assurance is always an attractive quiality,, this was
a very well self thought poem... nicely written as always...

[Wildfleour]

Okay, came back to leave a serious message for you, Ralphy.

Writing and passion for some is like oxygen. We need it to breathe and feel alive. I know I'm one of those people.

You created a great metaphor here.

xxx's

[Wildfleour]

Ego poem! :)