A welcome surprise

 

A welcome surprise

 

She closed my eyes

and said I could not peek

then asked me so pleasantly

to open my mouth

and I could not resist,

as she slipped a surprise

into my mouth.

 

My tongue began to scrabble,

wiggling in a frightful way

as if it wanted to jump out

into the evening air

and run for cover.

 

 I almost started to gasp

then she placed her lips

on mine

and my tongue relaxed

and savored the flavor

of the melting cube.

Reviews

[Pj]

WOW! That was a sexy lil stunt hehehe
Very imaginative!

[Jessica Fox]

and of course I went to the dirty place ^_^ well I guess this puts a whole new meaning to melts in your mouth not in your hands. Good job!

[closed account]

hmmmmmmm sounds yummy!! what a delightful read.. thanks for sharing it!!

[just is]

Wow! This is wonderful

[Wildfleour]

Nice........the words melted into my mind.