I have heard you Cry

To a outstanding writer whose passion for life was numbed by the lost of her son, and all those bad memories...I've heard your cry...special thanks to Wf

 

I have heard you cry

 

 

You’re such a beautiful writer

your words are like a magical brush

that spread about the paper

like an adrenaline rush

I have felt your sorrow

cried your pain

but something is missing

something’s not the same.

 

Your joy of love

and caring ways

as drifted into 

the wasted days

I know it hurts

so badly for you 

the emotions of loss

is riveting blue

 

But a friend of mine

wants to know

what happens

when you look at the snow?

Do you see the beauty

that wants to flow

or are you blinded

by the cold?

 

Violet asks:

when you see me

a flower so new

what do you see

one so true?

A fragrant that lifts

above your scent

a breeze, a drift

that is what’s meant

to be lost in a world

unforgiving as such

like a blemished pearl

diamond rough

a little bit of polish

let us see you

for this is just the beginning

for one so true

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

This is a flawless, outstanding poem. One of my favorites of yours. Well done!

[All faded blue]

I do not know who this is written for, but they are truly blessed to have you for a friend. I hope she is able to get through these hard times, knowing there are those who love and care for her so deeply.

[Pointblank]

That is so touching. Deeply meaningful. To have such a friend that would care so much to make sure the world is seen through gods eyes is absolutely the best friend ever. Loved it!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

My heart goes out to her for I too have lost a son. A beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Jessica Fox]

Another great write good job, yeah I don't have much to say ^_^

[Amanda]

what a beautiful write for your friend....i hope that she knows that she has a wonderful friend in you. i know that she will never be able to forget the pain, but i hope that she will be able to go forward with her life.

Amanda

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is a really wonderful write for your friend... it shows true compassion and understanding... what a gentleman you are.

[Wildfleour]

An incredible gift to your friend, Ralphy. I hope she hears and that it is balm to her soul.

One of your best writes, ever.