The great cosmic orgasm (and me)

Seek and you shall find...well you never know

 

The great cosmic orgasm

(And Me)

I don’t remember the great cosmic orgasm, that reached out across the sky, they say it really happen, oh so long ago, I wonder where was I? Or how everything seemed to drift forever while occupying no space in time, while looking for the answers that seem to rattle in my mind. I don’t remember the concussion, it made that very day or the beautiful colors it produced that split from all the rays. I don’t remember how hot it was, or how cold it really got, as it floated through the unknown space as a pinpointed dot.

 

I don’t remember either of them that stirred up so much dust, to produced so many stars and moons sounds like it must have been rough. Each one had its own vague history laced between the stars although a mortal mystery just outside of mars. They say it has all happen before in a wave of venturing lights. So spread your wings, lift, and ring to ponder what is right.

 

I search the heavens for a new life, in hopes to catch a glimmer of truth. Another world came into view that seemed to capture blue. It was a precarious planet, which harnessed a glowing moon... I am sure I’ll find the answer, I’m sure I’ll find it soon. 

On the other side of this distant sun, this man came into view; he was bouncing up and down as if he found something new. It seemed he had made a discovery and was waving something around.  

I watched and waited, to see what he was waving, then I zoomed into focus and I was really elated…”I’ve waited for so long to see another just like me, but the shock was a real surprise, for this man, was none other than me.”

Author's Note

Just some fun

Reviews

His elation better tell you what it is as well.

Cosmic orgasm, perhaps, one of the most sought after.

Is there ever such a thing as too much orgasm?

Amazing fundamentals Ralphy, I do not even see the sense of me repeating myself on that field. You have mastered it.

and the concept, unique, and has your signature indeed.

A wonderful piece.

[Jessica Fox]

Its always about the man getting off isn't it? LOL just kidding what an interesting story, I have no idea what to say about this explosive sticky piece

[J. James Reider]

I liked the form you used for this. It was sort of mind bending.

Cosmic orgasm sounds kind of rupturing... lol... It is a great read!

Terrific job!

[Carole]

Not sure if I would label this a poem...It's more of a short story to me, but you've got a very interesting write here. Well done, Ralphie! An interesting write on the "Big Bang" theory!

[universalove]

it was very nice .the end made me smile.

[Dani California]

If this is your idea of fun......
then I like how you play, my friend! :)

Great job Ralphie...
I love the unfolding of self discovery
as it relates to the universe... awesome!

Adding this one to my favs :) Thank you!

[Angela]

What do you mean "just for fun"? This is an awesome poem Ralphie!! I enjoyed it a lot. As with all your other

work, I can close my eyes and really visualize the subject. Great Job!

[Pj]

Really great! I loved the rhyme in this- it was done to perfection!
Great work Ralphy :D

[Wildfleour]

It's good, Ralph. Really good.

[emz]

Wow... Excellent.... like a parrallel universe or something??
Really cool write

i enjoyed it lots and lots



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