Who is this we call woman

 

Who is this we call Woman

 

 

Women are as pure as the driven snow

That carpets the grass and roads below

The chill that they deliver is oh such an illusion

For women have a bond with holy fusion

 

To listen to them talk, is a stark wonder

To listen to them cry, hurts so bad

To listen to them laugh, is like clapping thunder

To listen to them scream, is all so sad

 

To watch them beautify is a treat in itself

To watch them walk as they strut to perfection

To watch them glide in the air like a stealth

To watch them signal others to their direction

 

To see their faces, eyes and nose

Each one has something just for them

Blankets their bodies with fancy clothes

You know every women is a gem

 

To describe their bodies might be a sin

For their breast, and curves take flight

That might be whispering in the wind

As us men challenge to the hype

 

Oh yes, women are our guiding light

No, matter what we try to say

No matter what’s in our line of sight

Now or yesterday

 

 

Reviews

[Pauline Marie Daley]

Beautiful poem. Its nice for a man to testify to all that is a woman. We are complicated creatures yes, but have so much to offer. You really showed that here. Awesome job. :-)

[Wildfleour]

For their breast, and curves take flight - For their breasts and curves take flight


Yes, we are all that and a bag of chips! :)

A nice write, Ralphy.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

You make me proud to be a woman. So beautifully written and so true true true. [smile] Good write, giving praise to the mothers, sisters and wives, aunts and grandma's too, to the world.

[Jessica Fox]

hmmm to me this poem was filled with innuendo as well as beautiful words, but then again I'm not one of those pure as the driven snow women. Good job

[Pj]

This is gorgeous and being a woman, I am flattered :D
To make this piece go even further, I'd drop the rhyme...but other than that it was lovely!
Great line:
"Oh yes, women are our guiding light" that went right to my core :)

Great job!