If I was a Fruit

Little humor

 

If I was an apple I would stem to a tree waiting to be plucked by the elegant Eve who I know will bare it all after she bite into me

 

If I was a banana I would wiggle my way to the outer bunch so that the island queen will pick me and peel my soft coat to taste my sweet fruit.

 

If I was a pear I would ring the bell to signal my ripeness in hopes to woo the princess to taste me. As she shines my surface to reflect her beauty, her teeth tears my outer skin, oozing as the juices drool down her perfect lips.

 

And if I was a peach, my appealing colors will attract a starlet that will touch me and feel my tenderness; as her taste buds overwhelm her sensors while she sinks deep into the fleshy part of me.

 

So what if I was a fruit, I would be marveling which would be the best fruit to be…Eve kind of has the edge for her blushing red.

Reviews

[DarkIriswriter]

aww, its very cute and it makes me want to eat some fruit myself.Ralphy you have a way of words i don' t think anyone else can do... i lov eit great write!

sara

[Angel's Lady]

Erotically temptation of the taste buds! Very good job! ^_^

[L.G. Knight]

Very Cute! I appreciate your entry into the Silly Rhymes contest but I have to reject your submission because it does not rhyme Though it is super sweet and very cute! Thanks for sharing it! Great Job on it!

~Frances~

[Michael X]

this is an all around well written poem, the comparative aspects really draw forth imagery,
to me, in form and contex, your words read as a perfect story poem, as each seperate stanza
draws the reader to certain contemplation,as your words are written in true metaphorical
perspective, as well as capturing humor in romance, i'm sure many can relate, nicely done.

[justjenn_2u]

Witty mixed with tantalizing. I love the comparison of fruit mixed with sensuality. Very tasty write!!!!

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I like this. It makes me hungry. Its cute though!!