str8 flexin

selfie culture.

a snap of self reflection

and two more snaps 

of self- re-flexin

evidence of your

self-reflex-to-shun

smile pretty for the camera

Reviews

[The Purple Witch]

I agree with Dead Alive Dave, stretch this out and it can turn into something even more awesome. :) I like the message this gives though. Smile for the camera, despite how fake that smile may be. :) Great job, mate. :D

[J. B.]

this is made to be a short verse, not to be a long poetic work. like the click of the iphone camera lense. therefore, I will not change it or lengthen it. but thanks for the input.

[The Purple Witch]

Ah, I fully understand. :) I do a lot of my works short. Tends to get the message across better.

[J. B.]

thanks for the input and suggestion though :)

[The Purple Witch]

No problem. And thank you for sharing your brilliant mind. :)

[Davidgeo]

The last line is clunky.

Flesh this out more and you may have something.

I bet you wrote this inside 13 minutes.