Revenge for a Soul

Revenge for a Soul

A Story by Babypax

Revenge for a soul

I should have read the contract. My soul for exchange of his services. Of course. Never trust a demon they said, but I was desperate. That man killed my mother took everything from me and I had a burning passion to show him the consequences. Since the police weren't going to do anything it was up to me. I went to everyone for help but I had nothing to offer them in return. Finally I went the last person on the list. The Demons. They made it sound like they were doing it for free. They fulfilled their part thou. Soon after i left 3 of them went to his house and did worse than i ever could. Wrapped him in barbed wire till the blood was flowing like a river. But they weren't finished yet. Every 10 seconds they sent a bolt of electricity thru his body making him squirm causing the cuts to open more. After 20 minutes of the torture the last drop of blood hit the floor and then it happened. My soul was no longer mine. The life i lived did not belong to me anymore. At first i was so mad at myself for not reading that contract. But when they told me what they did to him my soul didnt matter anymore. I was so pleased with their work i became one of them. They took me to the body of the man who took my mother away from me and the only words that came to mind were "how did that feel dad"

© 2016 Babypax


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Nice punchline
"Never trust a demon they said ( needs a comma here) but I was desperate". I had to read a couple times to under stand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice punchline
"Never trust a demon they said ( needs a comma here) but I was desperate". I had to read a couple times to under stand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Babypax

8 Years Ago

Awesome. Thanks for the tip :)

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