Broken Pieces

I am broken and I'm trying to be okay.

I want my voice to be heard. I want to be different. I still feel the pain. It doesn't go away. Every time I'm alone or have free time to think, my mind always wonders off and it always comes back to you.. All the time. Isn't that funny? My mind always chooses you in the end even if it known you broke me into a million little tiny pieces? I find that really entertaining. Why did you make me think you care in the first place? Did you want to see how easily I could break? Well congragufuckinglations. You did. You officially broke me beyond repair and you don't even care. You never did. I wish you could just I don't know maybe disappear. But unfortunately I'm not a magician and that would be mean. I keep saying that I'm not mad at you but its kinds of in the middle. I'm mad at you for pretending to be someone you weren't but I'm not because I know it's not your fault. But at the same time under all this anger and madness, I'm mostly mad at myself. Not only because I exposed myself to love but because I fell for you. And thank you. Thank you so much for not only teaching me but teaching me specifically that I have to be careful with who I trust to hold my heart.

Author's Note

What do you think of this? Comment please.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

I agree with Relic. But outside of the obvious, it seems to be emotional and situational. A pure thought thrown down. Now expand, shape, structure. Nothing wrong with being raw, but shape the clay. Good Luck.

[Relic]

I think it would benefit you to study grammar, poetry and punctuation. They're important.

Good luck with your writing.

[Relic]

I think most people do. The idea is to go over what you've written and try to improve it for those that are going to read it.

But if you're not into that than I wish you luck.

[Overthinker101]

I mean I do go over what I wrote sometimes and try to improve as a writer but I'm not all that good about punctuation and grammar so I don't really look for those mistakes.

[Relic]

Well, you're not really that bad. Being able to vary your sentence length helps so it doesn't sound choppy. Keep writing and don't stop if you like it. I myself am always learning something new. :)

[Overthinker101]

Thank you.

[Relic]

You're welcome.