Religion

Religion

A Poem by VisibleLies

I am my own religion;
My body my shrine.
My mind my god.
My soul, keeper of Heaven.
My concious, keeper of Hell.

© 2010 VisibleLies


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I feel this poem is very subjective. People can relate to it in every way imaginable, whether or not they have the same mindset as you did when you wrote this poem.

I like this poem. It is short, yet powerful. It speaks a story with very few words, and paints a clear picture of empowerment.

Just something to ponder upon:
Could your concious be the keeper of Heaven, and your soul the keeper of Hell?

I guess it'd depend on the mood you are in at the time of pondering.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this. It's very self contained and the philosophy allows one to be more put together. Beholden to none, yet able to help as they can without fear of retribution.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

Posted 14 Years Ago



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A Poem by VisibleLies