A Note To The Devils

A Note To The Devils

A Story by Pen The Willows
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Names have been changed to protect the identities of people.

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Dear Maya, Eloise, Lillian, Natalya, and James (2-25-10):

 

     Thanks for forcing me to grow up. You've created a monster. And you've created a free-thinker. I know that free-thinkers are banned in your Plastic-toipa, so maybe that's why I was glad to leave. So screw all of you. Maybe you should find something for your life goal that doesn't involve tearing others down.

     Grow backbones, all of you. Anything you can say behind someone's back, you need to be able to say to their face. Unless you're afraid that they'll punch your face, and ruin the noses that Maya's daddy bought you.

     I can't believe that you corrupted innocent little Natalya. Not only that, I can't believe that Natalya actually let you rope her into your Plastic society. Actually, I can. Natalya has no backbone, and always lets you guys boss her around. So good job, Natalya. You've been Plastic-ified.

     James, I though you were different than the other guys at our school. The ones that call me 'b***h' and the ones that hate me. And you are different. Instead of verbal abuse, you tore out my heart, threw it on the ground, smashed it with a jackhammer, and broke it into pieces so small that each is about one-tenth the size of an atom. So congratulations are in order, I suppose. You've become one of Them. So have a nice life with Elizabeth or Maya or whoever. I hope you're proud of yourself.

                  Sincerely,

                           The Girl Who Hates You All

© 2010 Pen The Willows


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i absolutely freaking love this, oh course it makes me happy because i hate about 98% of people, but this is extrememly well written, i love it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In addition to being genuinely emotional, it was written very well. I especially liked the "ruin the noses that Maya's daddy bought you" line.

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