Pretend

Pretend

A Poem by Pen The Willows
"

I'm tired of pretending.

"

I

Am

TIRED

Of

Pretending

 

Trying

To

Be

Someone

I

Am

NOT

 

A

LOVING

Daughter,

CARING

Sister,

 

 

GREAT

Student,

AMAZING

Friend,

 

Someone

Who

Cares

What

Other

People

Think

 

 

Obviously

I

DON'T

Care

 

I

Just

Want

To

Be

MYSELF

 

I

Don't

Even

KNOW

Who

I

AM

Anymore

 

You

Have

ROBBED

Me

Of

My

IDENTITY

 

CONGRATULATIONS

On

STEALING

My

SOUL

© 2010 Pen The Willows


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wow its sooooo emotional i love it cause ppl can relate to it alot

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent work. I really like the style and form this is written. I like the sense of the way the words flow combined with the deep emotion. I have felt many of these things in the past. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loveee it (: your an amazing writer =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:O I Can Feel The Emotion. I Like It. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 28, 2010
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Pen The Willows
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I'm 18 years old and I'm in my sophomore year of college. Most of the writings archived on here are from when I was in middle school and high school, and they aren't really very good. I wasn't going t.. more..

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