Water

My science teacher is forcing us to enter this writing/picture contest about watersheds (I really have no idea what that is), so this is the rough draft of my poem. Tell me what you think.

We

Are

All

Connected

 

Living Creatures

Mammals

Amphibians

Plants

 

Connected

By

The

Water

 

Stream

River

Lake

Ocean

 

It

Is

A

Home

 

It

Is

A

Drink

 

It

Is

A

Nutrient

 

It

Is

A

Tool

 

To

Live

Thrive

Survive

 

We

Must

Have

Water

 

A

Part

Of

Us

 

Without

Water

We All

Die

 

Water

From Our Watershed

Connects All

Life

Reviews

[Esmeralda Enten]

Loved it sweetie!

[Nathan Durham]

That was pretty good. Again, I love the flowing style that you use in your poetry. I liked how you demonstrate that everything in this world is connected by a common need. If you enter this in a contest, I would give this first place.