Love

Love

Is

Wonderful

Fantastic

 

Your

Heart

Is

Filled

 

Your

Thoughts

Are

Clouded

 

When

You think

Of

Him

 

And

You

Are

Distracted

 

Every time

That

He is

Mentioned

 

When

You want

To be

With him

 

Or

Be

Around

Him

 

All

Of

The

Time

 

That

Is

When

You know

 

With

All

Your

Heart

 

He

Is

The

One

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

Very nicely done. This piece is simple and straightforward, which is something I really like. All to often a writer will try to hide true emotion behind flowery speech to the detriment of a piece. That is not the case here and the piece is admirably done.

[gabby]

omg this one is so fantastical i love it

[Nathan Durham]

I liked it. I liked how you got a major point across without sugarcoating it. This is just straight language. Good job.

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

omg. i can totally relate. this is how i feel about my bf, he is truly amazing. =]

keep up the good work, i really enjoyed this

[Lexi =]]

This is real good! It's simple and sweet. It expresses how you feel about love.
Very well written =]