Parts Of Me

You're

On

The

Outside

 

You

See

Me

Smiling

 

I'm

On

The

Inside

 

I

See

Me

Crying

 

You

Never

Can

Remember

 

That

I'm

An

Actress

 

I'm

Am

ALWAYS

Acting

 

I

Act

Rather

Indifferent

 

But

I

Really

Care

 

I'm

Good

At

Hiding

 

You

Only

Ever

See

 

One

Part

Of

Me

 

That's

All

Anyone

Sees

 

One

Of

The

Many

 

Many

Parts

Of

Me

Reviews

[Nathan Durham]

This one was pretty good. I liked the simple style used to convey your emotions. This one got me thinking about the sides of people that they don't show.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Again, this is a straightforward and simple style...which works really well for you. I am glad to see you becoming comfortable with a distinct style and look forward to what you produce when you move beyond your comfort zone.