Stage

The world is a stage

Half of me just a player

By day I play

By night I fade

 

I

Am

Forlorn

Forgotten

 

I

Put

On a

Mask

 

And

Become

Someone

New

 

A

Disguise

A

Role

 

Something

That's

Not

Me

 

My whole

Life

Is

Cast

 

Actors

Who aren't

What they

Seem

 

Replacing the

Script

With their

Own words

 

Soon

I will

Break

Free

Reviews

[gabby]

loved it keep up the good work

[Wolfe Greytome]

While I love the subject of this piece, I must admit I wasn't thrilled with the format. It almost seemed as though you were searching for a different style to play with, but that you form you are most comfortable with kept creeping up on you.

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

this was great. =] i loved it =]

[Stephanie]

Why do you change style? I'd say keep the sparse stanzas the whole way through.

[TopHatGirl]

LOVE IT. Awesome. My favorite part:

Replacing the
Script
With their
Own words

Keep it up :)