Hell

Hell

A Poem by Pen The Willows

I've
Never had
Friends
Like you
 
Because
You
Aren't
My friends
 
Friends
Will
Stick
Together
 
They
Never
Put you
Down
 
They
Never
Make you
Cry
 
They never
Make
You
Frown
 
You guys
Never
Stick with
Me
 
You guys
Always put
Me
Down
 
You guys
Have
Made me
Cry
 
And often
Made
Me
Frown
 
So
Good luck
To
You
 
I wish
You
Very
Well
 
And the next
Time that you
Think of
Me
 
I hope
You
Got to
Hell

© 2010 Pen The Willows


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Awesome. I can totally relate to this. It's blunt, it's too the point and I love it.
In the 10nth stanza 'Make' might sound better as 'made' though that it just my opinion. Aside from the trivial thing, this is perfection.
Keep it up and I like the format.

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