See Me

Another new poem for you people!

You

Don't
See

Me

 

Clearly

Enough

For

Me

 

What

Does

It

Take?

 

My

Friend

My

Love

 

It

Is

Never

Enough

 

I

Won't

Go

Down

 

Without

My

Best

Fight

 

Cause

This

Isn't

Alright

 

Never

Leave

You

Behind

 

I'm

Not

That

Kind

 

Keep

That

In

Mind

 

So

Close

Your

Eyes

 

Open

Up

Your

Heart

 

And

You

Will

See

 

What

I

Have

Seen

 

From

The

Very

Start

Reviews

[nora]

oh wow, i like this one :)
the format is kind of unusaly and little hard to read, but its unique and i like it.
the concept is pretty universal, so pretty much anyone can realte, which is important when youre writing :)

'And You Will See
What I Have Seen
From The Very Start'

this part is my favorite :) it ends the whole poem perfectly.
keep it upp, alice :D

[gabby]

that's a wonderful poem it's like your saying that some people should try to see what's going on in life in ur pov without u having to tell them

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

"so close your eyes open up your heart" my fave lines...great job!

[fallen angel]

I liked it...it's hard to get others to see you as you want them too, or to see others how they want to be seen

[Lunar Lightning]

This is a great poem, though I have a suggestion for you: make it longer, turn it into a scene with more emotion and more words to dicribe it. Make a picture in my head, because right now all I saw was empty words. Though, still it was a good peice. Nice job.

Luna