Darkness

A poem I randomly wrote on my phone.

As you carve

The path to darkness

Remember

These simple words

 

 

Life

Is gone

Its

Long forgotten

 

 

Without

A

Single

Word

 

 

Without

The light

The world

Will freeze

 

 

You think

I'll survive

According to you

I'm cold-hearted

 

 

Guess what?

I'm not

I care

You don't

 

 

Don't

Judge me

You don't know

About me

Reviews

[nora]

wow, alice, this is really good :) i like it, even though i dont fully inderstand it. i interpretted it as, like, death or something? or something worse than death? like someone falling into really bad ways and drugs and s**t. lol.

"As you carve
The path to darkness
Remember
These simple words
Life
Is gone
Its
Long forgotten"

this is the part that i thought of as leaving an old, good life and going to a really bad one 'the path to darkness'
lol, great write, alice :) keep it upp!

[gabby]

WHOA......dude that poem was sooo inspiraational about life and how u cant forget it...i just love that about ur poems

[Black Angel]

i really liked it