Razor

Why would I

Want to stay

Here on Earth

Another day?

 

My life is bad

My life is crud

There are razors

All around

 

My brothers'

Shaving razors

My father's

Shaving razors

 

There are knives

Sharp

Sharp

Sharp

 

But I am

Intolerant

To pain

To hurt

 

There are

No cuts

That are

Purposeful

 

My only

Place to release

Pain

Is here

 

In my poetry

I relinquish

Claim to

My pain

 

This

Is

My

Razor

Reviews

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is the kind of poetry I knew you had the potential to write. Deep, Powerful...flawless. Well Done!!!!!!!!!!

[levi]

my fave!

[nora]

i love this! this is like, fricking amazing ;D the whole idea of using poetry instead of blades is really hope-filling, and it hit me hard.

'This
Is
My
Razor'

i love those lines. theyre super powerful and makes the reader thinkk :)
great job! :)

[Marina]

I love this!

This is so great and i agree with it 100%!
I love the whole idea and the writing itself is just great!

Awsome job!

XxStaySweet,
Rina