The Sound My Heels Make

a funn poem : )

I like the noise my heels make as I walk

And the way they make my hips sway

You sure won’t be looking away

And one day I’ll be walking away from you

And you can hear the clicking noise of your departing ex boo

I’ll walk away swaying my hips

A flick of my hair will tell you I don’t really care

My sunglasses will hide my tears

My smile will mask the hurt

and I’ll keep walking

into the arms of my life without you

…without my ex boo…

Reviews

[Sleepless]

i liek thsi peom too although heels a res uch a pain i tried that once but it was hard to stay balanced on heels :P love the poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like a woman in heels with movement in their walk. Make a man dream and hope. I like the directness of the words and the very good ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is good!

[Demi Rose]

very cool. loved how u composed this piece.

[hmm]

the color makes it kind of hard to read, I enjoyed it alot.
That is why I wear sunglasses at times, to hide the tears.
Amazing fill of feeling write, could feel this.