I hope you're doing alright...

about my ex...

Sometimes I wonder how you’re doing

Yanno, babe I’m living my dream right now…

But tell me why is it when I look at the stars I think of you somehow?

Those nights we had under the stars…

Just taken’ rides in your car

Smoken’ a joint and talkn’ bout our lives

It couldn’t have been more right…

And those memories will always be with me

Like an old book that I just keep rereading

I hope you’re doing alright…I know I’m doing just fine

But it sucks when I have to shower alone

And sometimes it takes effort to not to want to be alone

But you did me wrong and I don’t forget

You broke my heart but Ill get over it

Time only heals this s**t

And when you get out…

Ill be a new girl, b***h

And you’ll wish you never let me go…

Cuz Ill be on top of the world and you’ll be with another f*****g hoe

I’m sorry things turned out like they did

I wish you the best

…and oh watch out Karma’s gunna kick your a*s

Reviews

[the in between]

The ending had me laughing since the beginning is contrasted. Loved this :) keep writing!

[Sleepless]

lol true that what you said in there !:P what comes around comes around dont worry he wasnt worth it !:P

[Elizebeth Brooks]

Something else awesome from the awesome BABYBLUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!! Great job!! I loved it. :))

[Miss'LC]

1. your even more amazing then I thought for smoking joints.
2. LOL at this poem.
3. This is amazing, + I love it.
4. Your a really good writer:)xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with direct and powerful emotion. Anger and disappointment leave us wishing for a better end. No easy way to lose someone you care for and be left alone. I like the language and honest words in the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

" And those memories will always be with me
Like an old book that I just keep rereading "
Lovely words you use in here...
I feel you're in hurt though... Keep the head up always dear.
Deeply and lovely write...xxx