I miss you terribly

I miss you terribly

A Poem by BabyBluee
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I wrote this about my ex wen we first broke up and I just found it on my computer...wat do u think?

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Do you know how hard it is to breathe?

I’m used to having you there next to me

Every day I dream of what it could be…

You and me…if things turned out differently

But now I’m left with regret

But it’s in the past, it’s done

Now I just have to move on

…but to what? I made you my stone

You were my backbone

And now I’m paralyzed

I can’t even breathe

The tears won’t even fall

I can’t answer your calls…

It’s too late, you stole my heart

It hurts too much

You ripped me apart

I just asked for your love

I guess you gave me the best you could

I’ll always love you

I hope you think of me the same

…every time the wind blows I hope you hear my name

And you smile and you think of me

I just want you know

…I miss you terribly

 

 

© 2011 BabyBluee


Author's Note

BabyBluee
he was the love of my life...he ripped out my heart

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A sad poem. I could feel the sadness and desire to understand. The description was very good. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


ok now after reading all of this poem what happened cause im really curious now ?!!! and no wrong if he was your love ten he was going to stay with you no matter what :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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emotionsly deep write, can feel the tugs on the heart, well expressed

Posted 13 Years Ago


Deeply beautiful, longing, and missing him... you translate your heart so well... well penned dear.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 25, 2011
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BabyBluee
BabyBluee

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Hey guys so I’m babybluee…I’m writing to you because I need a place to rant basically and I would love to get all ur opinions on wat I write. I’m going to be writing to you as.. more..

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