Cleansing Rain

... Just a thought that came to me ... it's super short.

I feel the rain within my soul.
It cleanses me and then,
I lift my face toward the sky,
And I can dance again.

Author's Note

I might add more later ... but for now it feels complete.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

i do not feel you need to add to this. Yes, it is short - but I think you have said so much here. There is the rain that comes in - at first, knocking you down a bit - yet as it continues it cleanses your soul - giving you the strength to find your feet once more - looking up at the sky, letting the rain hit your face - you dance. Nice.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short but sweet and uplifting... the rain can be a spiritual cleanser.... what a wonderful burst of inspiration.

[Emily B]

it may be short, but what a big thought :)

I love it