Cleansing Rain

... Just a thought that came to me ... it's super short.

I feel the rain within my soul.
It cleanses me and then,
I lift my face toward the sky,
And I can dance again.

Author's Note

I might add more later ... but for now it feels complete.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

i do not feel you need to add to this. Yes, it is short - but I think you have said so much here. There is the rain that comes in - at first, knocking you down a bit - yet as it continues it cleanses your soul - giving you the strength to find your feet once more - looking up at the sky, letting the rain hit your face - you dance. Nice.

[Bubo]

Sometimes rain feels like that, when we feel new and clean......I enjoyed this, reminds us of the very simple things in life bring harmony and peace. Loved the shortness, no more was needed.

[qaralynn]

very beautiful poem..love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

It si beautiful. In so few words the story was told. A very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[AK]

Simple, clean, elegant! Well done!

[Jetta Zippora]

Beautiful! Short and sweet, yet full of so much power and mystery...nice write, friend! :)

[Edalene Connell]

I like this, it is short, but says so much. Rain can be very refreshing and you can't help but dance.

[TL Boehm]

beautiful. I haven't had that experience in a long time but I remember rain like this and doing this - lifting up my face to it and finding it cleansing....inside and out.

[Helen Woodward]

It is in every way complete, to add more text would take something from it. A healing stanza Chookie and anyone who reads it will be blessed by it...wonderful xxx

[SM Davis]

I love the rain. It is renewing. I don't think you need anything to add. Sometimes less is more.

[An Ordinary Woman]

I love super short and your poem shows an exquisite side of you. It gorgeous, like you. Good job Dezaraye!