Spring Snow

It's almost May and it's snowing out today ... and it makes me feel like this.

Hand pressed against the glass

Prints left behind

And smudged

 

Snow wafts carelessly

Falling upon the frozen ground

It's so cold

 

Wind drifts through the cracks

Lifting my hair against my face

It tickles

 

I shiver in the cold

And feel my heart beat labor

I hurt so much inside

 

Clouds cover the sky

And they cover the light in my eyes

I'm being crowded out

 

My ears no longer hear

My heart no longer feels

My entire self becomes numb

Author's Note

Hopefully tomorrow the sun will shine ... it's funny how the weather can affect me so deeply ... but maybe it was storming inside before it started to storm outside.

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

no worries sweet one - though Spring snows can be the most depressing, since one is looking forward to sunshine and flowers and such - they never stick around very long. The sun will shine tomorrow - the grass will green and the flowers bloom. It is a proven fact that winter blues are real - our bodies are made for sunshine - they crave it. I hope this review finds that snow melted and some warmth returning to your heart.

*hugs*

laura

[Yvonne Heidt]

*clapping!*

Last saturday it was 80 degrees - this weekend Sandy played softball in HAIL. I know how you feel Dezaraye, the weather affects me the same way! Lovely job. I loved it!

[Kelley Pascoe]

I know what you mean I live in Colorado and some days its sunny and warm and some days it cold and snowing(smile)
Great write! Very beautiful!!! Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[An Ordinary Woman]

Hopefully tomorrow the sun will shine for you tomorrow, but I understand. I know your writing about more than the weather here, those gut wrenching feelings that creep up but even I was amazed at how much better I felt when Spring arrived. I don't mean according to the calendar either. I mean when the grass turns green and all that. Your going to be ok, I am too. :+)

[Rain]

Many people are effected by the weather, The have had so many name for it...cabin fever, winter bla's, Now they even have a medical term fo it....S.A.D. I'm right with you in this piece. Love, Rain..

[All faded blue]

This intrigued me, I also am deeply affected by weather, grey skies make me sad and depressed, rain really hits me hard, and I hate snow! I could relate to your feelings, am sending some mental sunshine for you to bask in. I think this was really heartfelt, and many of us can relate to it.

[Jessica Benfield]

i know how you feel. you have an amazing talent for poetry, dezaraye. keep 'em comin'! lol
hugs,
jess

[An owl on the moon]

Amazing insight in both your poem and your author's note! Such sorrowful, beautiful words falling soft like your spring snow. Your images always amaze me; so vivid and deep like a painted masterpiece. Wish I could send you our 70 degree day to cheer you soul!