If ...

If ...

A Poem by Dezaraye
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Written in High School as a children's finger play.

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If I were a bunny

With a little button nose,

I would hop around all day,

On my little bunny toes.

 

If I were a birdie,

I would spread my wings and fly.

I'd fly higher than a tree,

Way up into the sky.

 

But, I'm not a bunny,

I can't fly higher than a tree.

Let me tell you a secret, though,

I'm happy being me.

© 2008 Dezaraye


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Baz
Very, very cute Dezaraye. The last couplet in particular is very sweet. Lovely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so cute but yet gives that wonderful message of loving who you are, now this brought a smile to my face. Adorable work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The greatest happiness is being yourself. You are there when you wake, when you go to sleep and all that is in between. I would be miserable if I was not happy being me.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cute. Almost reads like something that would be a great premise for a children's book. Ever thought of doing that?
Peace,
Chris

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a...FEEL GOOD...poem. I really enjoyed reading it Dezaraye. Very original and creative, and the flow was meticulous. Very nicely penned...Hugz...Jillian

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and innocent. Such a lovely poem for children to enjoy. Lydia

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dezaraye, that was great. It flowed really well. It was very cheery and upbeat and the message was
was beautiful. I agree I think children everywhere would just love this poem and probably go around singing
it too. Well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and very effective, unfortunately some walk all thier lifes trying to be someone thier not

Well done

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I second that awe! This really is so cute. I can see a child just loving this....as a song or a picture book. So nice.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww!!! I like this poem. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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