Revenge

Revenge

A Poem by AyeooSteph

You'r a fighter

Not a chick turner

Eye for an eye

Living like this till you die

Would only make the world blind.

Respect to the ones who hits back

Neighbors killed your dog, so kill their cat.

Everyone wants to be the one with the last words

I guess that's just how humans are

Always want to win, fair or not.

How about a little more of understanding?

Talk it out and have a good ending?

Knowing each other's perspective

Wouldn't be so defective

Revenge? ......Nahhhh

Let's move on from that !

© 2012 AyeooSteph


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This sends a message... the lines just roll down the page... the issue not to keep on fighting at times... you can stand your ground... but understand one another...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good moral message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol love it i love the wording in this poem is straight to the point ! and it has a good message keep writing !:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wise, wise words.
I believe revenge, fighting and hatred are the choice among the weak of honor and soul. You captured that brilliantly.
I'm impressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 30, 2012
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AyeooSteph
AyeooSteph

Brooklyn, NY



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My Name Is Stephanie. I Love To Express My Feelings Through My Writings, And Let Others Know My Perspective About Things. I Can Be Funny, I Love Talking To Others, And Share My Opinions. Add Me If You.. more..

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