I Want You Back

Your love was all for me
Your touch was all I need
Every moment spent together
Has been erased forever

We now can't see each other
Because of what I chose
We're no longer together
But now I want you close

Walking out on you
Is something I can't undo
I admit I still love you
But you don't feel the same way I do

I want you back

Hope it's not too late

Goodbyes' have been said

And our love turned into hate

Never thought that our division
Would be such a bad decision
'Cause now I want you here

Never too far, but always near

I need you right now, more than anything
So take me back, I'll do anything
I want you back, to kiss me up against the wall
To be there for me, and catch me when I fall

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

We all make mistakes in love and sometimes those mistakes feel horrible years later or maybe even hours later. I think we learn by our relationships and mistakes though. Every reason comes around to shed light on whatever decision you have made. Basically it builds our character.

[MoriartyMesa]

Left to linger,



It happens, but it comes reminds us too much of something that time seemed to miss.

[Nick.B]

Nice poem you manage to write here, the feeling of lost love is the hardest to describe, you did really well...great job

[Christopher Booyakasha]

wow. that was a really good piece.
nice. very nice!
how are you?

[Zachary_James]

I love this i felt every emotion, i'm going through samee exact thing. Hope everything turns out ok.

[mandy]

sometimes we make the wrong choice, but it seemed right at the time....and maybe it will work out,,,,good luck.

[Jordan's Back]

This is the most heart felt sorrowful poem I ever read! I have felt this way several times, and I can honestly say this struck my heartstrings. Im sorry for your loss. I hope he takes you back :)