Craving

 

The moon was bright
and we swayed.
My smile, genuine.  
The taste of his kiss so sweet
He looked into my eyes and I wanted more.

His hands touched me,
his arms held me tight
And I melted in his passion.
I lost myself to his touch
    …with you on my mind.
 

Reviews

[Bud]

A bitter sweet love poem. How many times has one in life been in someones arms receiving the nourishment they so need and desire...only to have the one who holds their heart on their mind at the same time. The forms that love, and the pains the come with it, can take. Excellent work of art, to say the least! Keep up the Outstanding works of art!

[Michael X]

wow, babbs, you have the most amazing way with romance, that cant be beat,
I must say I loved this and in character the entirety falls into the shades od seduction and power,
you have me with this one, excellent, and the sweet enticing nature is pulling and lulling.

[The Viking]

Ouch...pining for one lover while in the arms of another? That's what I gathered from that last line, making it a good, unpredicteable ending. Then again, that's just my taste. Excellent imagery and short and to the point.