In Dreams

In Dreams

A Poem by Babbette Francis

 

Under starry skies, I spoke into the wind;
a request for a love I once dreamed existed.
 
With my voice cast upon the wind
I spoke of one who would take my hand with compassion,
lead me with a whisper,
capture my heart with purity
and keep me warm with the sensation of his kiss.
 
My request was for the winds to find you,
and under starry skies,
in dreams,
I see your face
and in the light of day
 I eagerly await your arrival.

© 2016 Babbette Francis


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I really like this- it speaks of dreams and of faith in the Universe to provide just what you need. It is wonderful and heartfelt- after reading the last peice that I reviewed this seems a natural evolution to move on to the next face in life putting the past behind you- That takes alot of courage to do regardless of what the situation was- today too many people hang on to the past or cling to that which is not healthy or nuturing to their great determent, anyone who can break free and seek to create a positive and healthy new life should be applauded and so todya I will applauded you- not only for skill in writing but also in your courage and strength. Well Done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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We all await that one who will bring us complete love... we can almost see them though we have never met.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Under starry skies, I spoke into the wind"
Passion, soft, beautifully done-this poem captures
pure enchantment
and is a sure favorite to come back and escape
into true romance
Excellent writing.
Thanks

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now this is beautifully written .. simple and delightful ...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this poem because it captures so much in so few words. You have successfully combined artistry and imagery with emotion. This piece flows nicely and has a very light and magical feeling to it. Very nicely done.

On a more personal note, I think all of us have looked to the stars and wondered where our soul mate may be. We dream of this person all our life. We know that persons soul better than they do. The love, warmth, passion and completeness they bring is the only thing which can complete us on this journey of life.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

take my hand with compassion,
lead me with a whisper,
capture my heart with purity
and keep me warm with the sensation of his kiss.... I've searched too, let me know if you find it, I would be inspired to look again myself. I really don't mean to b sarcastic but I've searched the world inside out and I gave up. :+( I don't look any more. Maybe not looking will help...

This is lovely Babs. Can I call you that?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this- it speaks of dreams and of faith in the Universe to provide just what you need. It is wonderful and heartfelt- after reading the last peice that I reviewed this seems a natural evolution to move on to the next face in life putting the past behind you- That takes alot of courage to do regardless of what the situation was- today too many people hang on to the past or cling to that which is not healthy or nuturing to their great determent, anyone who can break free and seek to create a positive and healthy new life should be applauded and so todya I will applauded you- not only for skill in writing but also in your courage and strength. Well Done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 1, 2008
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Babbette Francis
Babbette Francis

Merryville, LA



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Its been years since I've written anything on this site but I entered a story in a contest and would like to see what becomes of it. I guess we'll see how that turns out. You can say I'm new again an.. more..

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