Cult Evasion

Sweetheart, I was caught up!! nice work. but i am a little confused at the point where Monti and Morrigann left the bus into the hotel, did they made love or is it that they fell asleep after this dialogue " The keys hit the ground moments later, the jingling of the colliding metal got the attention of most who were still at the bus station. Monti sauntered over, picked up the keys and took Morigann’s hand.
“Let’s go have some fun.”
They went into the first hotel they could find (that actually had a room available) and got their lodgings for the night.
“A toast to our year of secrets.”
“To secrets.”
they raced a single vodka shot down their throats, putting whatever time and energy they had left on the bed.
“You will never escape my grasp!”

I love the tight dialogue and the flow - steady picture. well done

Posted 7 Years Ago

Sweetheart, I was caught up!! nice work. but i am a little confused at the point where Monti and Morrigann left the bus into the hotel, did they made love or is it that they fell asleep after this dialogue " The keys hit the ground moments later, the jingling of the colliding metal got the attention of most who were still at the bus station. Monti sauntered over, picked up the keys and took Morigann’s hand.
“Let’s go have some fun.”
They went into the first hotel they could find (that actually had a room available) and got their lodgings for the night.
“A toast to our year of secrets.”
“To secrets.”
they raced a single vodka shot down their throats, putting whatever time and energy they had left on the bed.
“You will never escape my grasp!”

I love the tight dialogue and the flow - steady picture. well done

Posted 7 Years Ago