AFTERLIFE

If

There is life after death

I

Will gladly take

My

Last breathe

But

If it’s going to be

Just

Suffering and pain

From

Which only

The

Devil will gain

Then

I’ll accept on earth

What

I have wrought

And

By all my peers

Just

Be forgot

For

There is no use

In

Going on

If

There will not

Be

Some fun

WIZDUMBs BY JA 691    

Reviews

[NeilSHowe]

I like this without the last bit. It plays to a really odd futility and irony in how if life just ends but is only pain then I'll live but if eternal I'll die. Damn. The irony is really thick. Love it.

[Jill Cobb]

Interesting take on the afterlife. Which I believe there is one and it will be more than fun! I also like that it's short and straight to the point.