DARKNESS

Dark is the night, by the light of day

Harsh are the words, which some people say

Grievous the malaise, which we often feel

Deep are the wounds, of a hurt that won’t heal

Lasting the wrong, to whom it is done

Fleeting the moment, when praises are won

Tragic the loss, of someone we love

Empty the feeling, when they are thought of

WIZDUMBs BY JA 619     

Reviews

[A.K. Rohner]

Beautifully dark poem. Grimly gorgeous. Only two corrections: Heel should be heal, and there shouldn't be a comma after when.

Great work! Keep it up!