LOVE'S PARADOX

         

We each

                     Hope to find true love

But often

                      This simple premiss lack

That once

                      It is, to us gifted

We are obliged

                       To give it back

WIZDUMBs BY JA 644            

Reviews

[Warrior]

I like the format, it's unorthodox, but still enough to catch the reader's attention. Never the left the poem is good in it's own realm, after all it is short.

[Ja]

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