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(make your own individual name for the poem after reading it) id like to see what comes to your minds after reading this

The moon is vibrant tonight

Shimmering as usual with such poise

It seems to almost tempt me

To drift out my window and

Be high with her

It's trance roused me and

With a quickness

I was up there, with her

The sight was too livid and pure

Even for my seen it all eyes

To go there again, I couldn't bear

Thoughts of going back

I do long to be with her again

 

Reviews

[The Scholar]

Wow everyone is coming up with such interesting names.. Lovely poem. Made me feel as though I were up there with the moon myself. Too bad it's 3 o'clock in the afternoon here... I'll have to read it again at night to get the fill effect.

Ya, I'm bad with titles. I think I'll pass on this one. I like the "Longing" idea though, something along those lines would work. Great write.

[Lunny]

I like it, really good :)

[Eve]

My first thought was I wanted to name it High Moon, it's beautiful and full of longing, very nice write.