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(make your own individual name for the poem after reading it) id like to see what comes to your minds after reading this

The moon is vibrant tonight

Shimmering as usual with such poise

It seems to almost tempt me

To drift out my window and

Be high with her

It's trance roused me and

With a quickness

I was up there, with her

The sight was too livid and pure

Even for my seen it all eyes

To go there again, I couldn't bear

Thoughts of going back

I do long to be with her again

 

Reviews

[The Scholar]

Wow everyone is coming up with such interesting names.. Lovely poem. Made me feel as though I were up there with the moon myself. Too bad it's 3 o'clock in the afternoon here... I'll have to read it again at night to get the fill effect.

Ya, I'm bad with titles. I think I'll pass on this one. I like the "Longing" idea though, something along those lines would work. Great write.

[Jyango Ryudo]

very pretty, i liked it. although i cant tell if its a love poem or what. other than that great job bud :)

[forevermore1218]

This was amazing. I felt a trans go through my body as I read it to the point where I thought my soul was lifted.

Keep doing what you do. Don't let go of your gift :)

[BMColey]

no nobody passed that i know. i was literally looking out my window last night and saw the moon and i just felt peaceful and wrote about it. but after reading it a couple of times i realized there can be namy different meanings to this. and i really like the title "long distance relationship"

[Chip]

"Starless Night" (the star being the dead person which I assume this poem is about), "Lonely Night" I'm not great with the names myself LOL.

As for the poem its well written and if someone did pass away I hope your ok.

[SeventhSin]

The first thought that comes to mind is "Long distance relationship" or "Longing for my other half" or "I want you here again." I know these names suck but it is the best I could do :) I really liked this peice! good job!! :)

[BMColey]

i like that...."A Calling"

[Keith]

The name I thought of - A Calling

Nicely done.

[Renée]

Reminds me of a song by Van Morrison called Moon Dance

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very cool. Maybe 'My Moon' or ' moonlight'. Something like that.