I Do These Things

I Do These Things

A Poem by BMColey
"

i love the up and downs in my life. they make me who I am.

"

Audacious, what a bountiful word

 

Reminds me Spring is always there for me

Gives me strength to swim up river

Even escape the swipe of a grizzly's claw

I know your hunger is feirce dear bear but

This life is mine and I'm living right now

Pushing limits and walking coal beds

I do these things

 

Sometimes reckless and bold

Prancing around with the burn of a deep fire

Confidence seeking from my attire

At the same time I yearn to retire

And to never be rehired

I think of one day meeting my sire, if he's available

Then I think of myself as Coley the Terrible

I laugh, then quietly sob

I do these things

© 2012 BMColey


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I really like it, it makes me smile with a kind of pride. I like how you tied in the image of the bear, and then to how it moves and how you associated other things within it. tho I think I saw the bear one in the same with the narrator not really separate but both bold and bare fire.


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this piece has deep meaning to me...

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You did very well bringing me into your youthful energy. Following that with an eye to the future set a wonderful contrast.
Well done.

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I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like it, it makes me smile with a kind of pride. I like how you tied in the image of the bear, and then to how it moves and how you associated other things within it. tho I think I saw the bear one in the same with the narrator not really separate but both bold and bare fire.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm Brandon. 20 years old and I just started writing about a month ago but ever since then I just feel better through and through. I've been through alot in life but who hasn't. Had heartbreaksbut aga.. more..

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