whats a god to a non believer

whats a god to a non believer

A Story by BMColey
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my thought process was wild on this piece. i dont write much and didnt really know how to write it "properly" as some people say...smh but enjoy

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people have will and they choose how to use it. they know they're decisions no matter the distractions or setbacks that come along in life. we carry on and let our sins consume the masses we come across. our world is full of sin and we accept this? a world of lust and evil? did he expect this from his people? is he accepting this as well? or has he already left us doomed upon our destruction? now and days it's a fragile discussion. hipocrites and falsettos conversate on the topic because they know you'll accept and allow it. after all, it's all we know...we're born this way right? but i refuse to believe that a being's will is born foul. there is no plan yet; you're too young too know of these things. but in reality we're doing these things...you come here a beautiful, pure being. you grow and base yourself around theories of the mind along with common sense. somewhere along the way though you lose your common sense. now you no longer have your own personal inclination.where to go, what to do? dont worry they're waiting for people like you. to trick you into manipulating and deceiving your own will. you lose yourself...your decisions, your consequences, and your fate are condoned by you and only you.

© 2012 BMColey


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We wake up each day with a choice, to do what we know is right or not. We wake up with the choice to be happy or not regardless of our circumstances. I am thankful that my higher power gives me the choice of free will.
Thank you so much for sharing your beliefs in this story.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i agree that we are born with a clean slate and it is our free will to decide and choose whatever we want to do. i don't believe there's a being we must answer to, but to be true to ourselves.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I agree as wel.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not sure who "they" are at the end, but otherwise I agree :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I'm Brandon. 20 years old and I just started writing about a month ago but ever since then I just feel better through and through. I've been through alot in life but who hasn't. Had heartbreaksbut aga.. more..

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